god, everytime i read this i love it even more. it really is wonderful, amazing work. i liked the addition of the bit with elle on the raid, catching the perp before he flushes the trophies. i don't recall that from before. it reminded me of the exchange on the pilot when Gideon tells her the word most repeated in her personnel file is "impatient". very nice addition to reinforce her FBI history. Really, i love the whole damned thing. i could squee all over the same parts all over again but i won't bore you with the same details. just know it's still one of my fav fics ever.